Still-Life Practice

First try. Too flat.

Many still-life paintings in the Chinese brush style that I’ve seen have a flat, one-dimensional quality to them. I don’t mind it if the subjects are interesting. But getting a bit closer to 2D makes those paintings even nicer.

While my attempt, above, is too “flat,” the second version that my teacher edited (below) became too fussy in my mind. But who doesn’t like the cool treatment of narcissus bulbs! That’s the best part.

How do you balance classic CBP style with realism?

Edited. Too fussy?

6 responses to “Still-Life Practice”

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    Susan Dlouhy

    I’m the 7:09 pm Anonymous!

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    1. Jan Avatar

      Thank you, Anonymous #2!

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    Anonymous

    I prefer your original unedited version. I’d say that means that YOU should be teaching the class!

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    Anonymous

    Best Chinese brushstroke paintings ever!

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    1. Jan Avatar

      You’re very kind, Anonymous!

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